First Draft With Directors Commentary

This is the first draft of our film opening. We have included a directors commentary in which we discuss the things we need to change about the opening and the feedback we got from our first screening.

Questionnaire Results

4 people said they like our use of sound, and the build up of it, the other two like the storyline.

Some things people thought we should add are more context.

In response to this feedback we have received, we are going to re film some of our shots to make them flow better we are also planning to add some more context in order to increase the length and make the opening make more sense.

Opening Questionnaire

3 Point Productions film opening questionnaire

1)      What did you think of this opening?

GOOD                                   AVERAGE                                            BAD

2)      Did the opening make sense?

YES                                         NO                                         SORT OF

3)      In terms of continuity how good was the film on a scale of 1 to 10

1              2              3              4              5              6              7              8              9              10

4)      In your opinion what was the biggest problem with the opening/what would you change?

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5)      What did you like about the opening?

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6)      Is there anything you think we should add?

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7)      We are planning on a new name for our opening. Any suggestions on what we could call it?

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